Today I wakeup at 7:30 a.m. After that I will brush my teeth, bath and drink one glass of water. Me and My husband discuss about the cooking like breakfast, lunch and dinner. finally we fixed the lunch as Egg kulambu with rice. First boil the egg and cook.
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Today I woke up at 7:30 a.m. After that, I brushed my teeth, had a bath, and drank a glass of water. My husband and I discussed what to cook for breakfast, lunch, and dinner. Finally, we decided to make egg kulambu with rice for lunch. First, we boiled the eggs and started cooking.”
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